Some people say that parents have more important roles to play in children development.However, others argue that friends and television have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people
is
of the opinion that parents have an important role to play in the Suggestion
are
development
of children. Whereas others opine that friends and environmental factors such
as television have a major role to play in children
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child
children's
development
. This
essay seeks to discuss both views and my opinion will be given.
Charity they say begins at home. In the home children should be closely monitored because development
begins at an early stage. For instance
, morals can be imbibed in children by telling them the essence of greets at different times,
teaching them table manners at a younger stage, values and family traditions are Accept space
,
also
instilled in these children. Furthermore
, parents should be in a position to decide needful activies
which can any specific behavior
activities
also
aid proper development
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development, such
such
as, engaging in physical exercise, helping in gardening work in the house, studying etc
Back in studies intended to provide general knowledge and intellectual skills (rather than occupational or professional skills)
arts
they
days, so many families have a particular tradition of screening friends who visit their children. objective case of they
them
their
This
is mostly done by the grandparents because most times their parents are busy with office work. Friends that have the same moral upbringing are accepted by the entire family. This
is because interaction with friends have
a major role to play in a Accept comma addition
friends, have
childs
life. Suggestion
child's
Also
, environmental factor such
as television contributes to a child’s development
. For example
, a child who is always watching violent programs on television will definitely become violent to people. Watching educating and entertaining programs will affect a childs
life positively.
In summary, I am of the opinion that a Suggestion
child's
child
childs
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child's
child
development
and upbringing should be the sole responsibility of the parents. Parents must monitor duely
friends their children keep and put a restriction to channels which are unhealthy for the children’s every day; without missing a day
daily
development
.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite