In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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Police and public clashes are reality of today's society as well as inevitable in some of the cases. Some districts of
United
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the United
States witnessed a 'curfew' in recent times and young people's movement had been restricted. Though it is a clamp down on civil
librarties
immunity from arbitrary exercise of authority: political independence
liberties
, my opinion is that, it is a necessary evil and need to be enforced in certain situations.
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essay will support and develop the
forementioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
opinion.
First
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and foremost, civil movement restriction is necessary for
safety
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the safety
of community in certain circumstances. Mostly, the measures are taken after some unfortunate incident. In most cases,
such
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incidents have the potential to break out into a full blown social crisis.
For example
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, in India,
such
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curfews are imposed after a court's decision on
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
socially sensitive matter.
In addition
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to that, streets
oftenly
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become dangerous for innocent
adolscents
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
adolescents
and
therefore
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,
thier
of them or themselves
their
third
movement is kept in check to ensure
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
safety.
Secondly
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, in
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potentially
incitable
not equitable or fair
inequitable
unsuitable
unstable
incidents, usual policing practices can become ineffective. In cases of mass public outrages, response time of forces may increase, which can lead to total law and order break down in an area.
This
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can be illustrated by police arrival time during Gujrat riots in India. In some of the cases, they took around four hours to reach the spot of
incident
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the incident
. In
absence
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the absence
of
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preventive measures, law enforcement agencies may take a lot of time as they need to cover a lot of ground.
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will ultimately result in
loss
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the loss
a loss
of more innocent lives and damage to public as well as private property. To summarize, curfew
imposement
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do look like a lot of
inconvinience
an inconvenient discomfort
inconvenience
inconveniences
and snatching of civil
libarties
immunity from arbitrary exercise of authority: political independence
liberties
by the administration.
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, it is for protection of innocent
civilans
associated with civil life or performed by persons who are not active members of the military
civilians
and allow them to live peacefully afterwards.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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