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Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people are of the opinion that
government
 should put
not
referring to the degree to which a certain quality is present
no
 money in building theatre and sport stadiums. While others opine that
such
 money should be spent on medical care and education
instead
. I am of the opinion that each one of them
are
Suggestion
is
 important and
government
 should allocate money to them respectively. Sport should be regarded highly and must be taken as part of a country’s identity.
For instance
,
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
 is popularly
know
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known
 for their good performance in cricket, Brazil is known for football.
Therefore
, stadiums should be part of national projects and can serve as
tourist attraction
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a tourist attraction
tourist attractions
 like the Emirate stadium in London. Most track sports are done in the stadium
such
 as car
race
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racing
, football.
Subsequently
, games involving other teams from other countries
are played
Suggestion
play
 in these stadiums which should be conducive and in good condition.
Finally
,
Accept space
,
sports and theatres have in one way or the other used to entertain people and
also
 have contributed in generating
a
Suggestion
an
 income
to
Suggestion
of
 a nation via hosting of games
such
 as
Olympics
Suggestion
the Olympics
 and world cup.
On the other hand
, medical care and education are various means the
government
also
 uses in reaching out to the
masses and
Accept comma addition
masses, and
 these places should
also
 be in proper working conditions. In conclusion, theatres and sports are the entertainment sectors and should not be overlooked by the
government
 as well as the medical care and education sector which
also
 requires a standard quality.
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