Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only government and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is a growing debate on who should be responsible for making the
environment
better. It is believed by some that individuals have no role to play as big organizations and government ought to be solely saddled with the responsibility. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with
this
as I believe that achieving a serene and
developed
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development
environment
is a collective responsibility of both governing agencies, companies and the entire populace. To start with, individuals participating in environmental improvement will bring about fast-paced development and a serene
society
to live in.
Although
governing agencies and large organization are majorly saddled with the responsibility of legislating laws and providing amenities for people to live comfortably, adhering to
rules
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the rules
and regulation on the part of the individuals will ensure progress of the
society
,
hence
, the role of the populace in achieving growth and development cannot be overemphasized.
For instance
, many of the amenities and
artifacts
a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
put in place to benefit people and beautify the
environment
in Lagos have been destroyed or stolen by unscrupulous inhabitants.
This
further
helps to
drawback
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draw back
environmental progress.
Furthermore
, the burden of a deteriorated
environment
is felt more by the people and as
such
, individuals should be devoted to collaborating with governments and big companies to ensure a growing
society
is achieved. To illustrate
further
, governments sometimes are incapacitated and most times not privy to information on the true state of things in our
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
.
Therefore
, it becomes the duty of the populace to render assistance through suggestion of innovative ideas, constructive criticism and report of societal ills to concerned agencies.
For instance
, Ilopoju, a rural town in Oyo State, Nigeria, was able to curb incessant banditry in the area by way of people giving police strategic information about the perpetrators of the menace. In conclusion, to ameliorate the
environment
, I believe there is a need for a collaborative effort from individuals, governing agencies and big companies as a whole and only when
this
happens can a significant progressed be achieved in the
society

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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