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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, people are using
technology
on
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at
 a very high rate. They are geek to
use
 new gadgets for their work and studies. They
also
 believe that students have need to
use
 computers, Internet in their education in
this
 generation while others
are disagree
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disagree
 with
this
 statement. They things that
its
it is
it's
 not necessary to
use
 in schools. I would have discussed on both sides in the upcoming paragraphs. Clearly,
technology
 and
Internet
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the Internet
has provided
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have provided
 ocean of knowledge to the learners. They can search any of the topic or subject with the one click of
mouse
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a mouse
.
In
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At
 present, it is becoming very easy to
use
 Internet for studies
instead
 of writing all things
on
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in
 notebooks. Infect, it becomes worthy for the students and increases their exam performance. To exemplify, Wikipedia is a main source of education for students where they can study their particular subjects.
However
, there are some people whose disagree with it that children would have
use
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used
Internet
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the Internet
 or any other
technology
 in schools. They think that if students have been using it while studies, it would be a cause of lack of communication with humans. As human interaction is
also
 very important for
them but
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them, but
 it is even possible through
Internet
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the Internet
. People whose think that their children will lose communication with others, Skype and Facebook
is
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are
 the best examples to show them that these kind of innovations are completely using for face to face talks or for video calls.
In
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At
 the conclusion, even though
access
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access, use
use
 of
Internet
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the Internet
 and Computers could be
effect
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affected
affect
 in a negative way in
education
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education, hence
hence
,
technology
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the technology
 is completely beneficial for students.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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