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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to latest fashion. Why is this happening ? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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In today’s world,
individuals
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individual
 cloth themselves and style their hair following the trend in vogue.
This
 will enable
one
 gain recognition in any circle
one
 encounters. Admittedly, as the saying goes,
one
 is addressed from the way he is dressed.
This
 statement is true and has affirmed it from our daily
endeavors
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavours
 and dealings. Every other day, the latest
fashion
 is being unveiled and that trend is what most people follow till a new
one
 comes in. There are lots of
fashion
 magazines that
show case
a setting in which something can be displayed to best effect
showcase
 the latest dresses and hairstyles
.
Accept space
.
 People who work or visit corporate environments, that immediate audience is given to anyone who stays in
fashion
. Research has shown that 90% of individuals who stay in
fashion
 gain
better audience
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a better audience
 in achieving
purpose
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the purpose
a purpose
 than people who do not. In my opinion,
this
 has affected development negatively because people who cannot afford the latest
fashion
 yet wants to be in vogue, tend to engage in unholy practices
such
 as, robbery and prostitution. These acts can lead to them losing their lives in the act or they can contract terminal diseases
,
Accept space
,
hence
,
Accept space
,
 the aim of engaging in trendy styles will be defeated at the end of the day.
This
 is evident in the daily happenings which the media air all the time. In conclusion, trendy
fashion
 has led people in engaging
into
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in
 wrong practices
,
Accept space
,
 which has not only affected them negatively but
also
 the society at large.
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