some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statement.

Nowadays, an opportunity for making choices have become controversial
argument
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argumentative
.
Although
, there are some people who have given
there
of them or themselves
their
consent of
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consent, of
agreement with it, while others are not agree with the argument. In my view, I
am completely agree
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completely agree
have completely agreed
with the statement because the availability of choices now easy and everyone is free to make it. On the
one
hand, regarding its availability, myriads of options available due to technology advancement. In other the words, in
modern world
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the modern world
a modern world
, conditions have improved a lot as
compare
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compared
to
past
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the past
in terms of easy accessibility of resources. Now, everyone
have
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has
the facilities to use internet, transportation, education
by
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of
their own.
Moreover
, access of the internet has provided the broad horizon of
informations
a message received and understood
information
and materials, which is imperatively very effective to convince ourselves.
For example
,
one
of renown e-sellers, Amazon, have more than
one
lakh
products available to sell which is easy for a buyer to go check in details and choose the best
one
for them.
Consequently
, the modern society is now
become
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becoming
proactive.
Secondly
, now everyone
consider
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considers
there
of them or themselves
their
right of freedom to make choices
instead
of fearsome. Even
government
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the government
have imposed
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has imposed
the law of freedom of choices on every
citizens
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citizen
. Nowadays, it is easy to do
work
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the work
of your choice as per
one
's convenience without any fear as well as government
also
provides security to protect the right of an individual.
for
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For
instance, in regards of adult marriage, it is only done
by
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with
their consent, no
one
can force anyone. If it, there is a strict plenty. Even now, parents
also
fully support their child to
live
go away from a place
leave
it freely with their choices. In conclusion, I agree because of the availability along with accessibility and freedom has provided countless opportunities of selection and have open the door to live life freely.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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