You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sam,
I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I am very fascinated with working in our company's head office
for six months because I want to enhance my working skills by learning the way how the employees operate there. Besides
, I also
want to explore our head office
area as I have had rumours of it being very technical.
And while
I am gone, don't worry about the office
work as I have planned to carry my office
laptop with me. I can also
attend company meetings via my smartphone without any hustle.
Since it will be my first time visiting our head office
I need your help to book a flight reservation. And also
, if you can provide me with a ride from the airport to the destination? Lastly
, I need some contacts of the people working there who can assist me with the accommodation.
Thank you
Yours faithfully,
HassanSubmitted by hassan05.quadri on
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains a single, clear idea. This will improve readability and coherence.
suitable writing tone
Use more formal language when addressing your manager, especially for work-related requests.
complete response
The letter clearly states the purpose of wanting to work in the head office and provides a rationale.
suitable writing tone
The letter uses a polite and respectful tone, making a good impression.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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