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Childern have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age of five or six right up untill the age of eighteen. What are the advantages and disadvantages if making childern do exams

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Nowadays,
childern
a young person of either sex
children
 are being examined on
regular basissince
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a regular basis since
regular basis since
very early age
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a very early age
, not only they are evaluated in
exams but
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exams, but
 on
day
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a day
 to day basis in
form
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the form
 of quiz, class participations and presentation.
However
, is it beneficial or has
sone
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
one
 drawback? In
this
 essay, I will explore the pros and cons of examination from the early grades to higher grades. I will start by looking at advantages,
firstly
, examinations are considered to be the best way to prepare
youngstersto
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youngsters to
 face the challenges in upcoming life.
Moreover
, it significantly helps to improve their confidence and self dependency.
Furthermore
,
childern
a young person of either sex
children
 get an opportunity to overcome on mistakes if they are being evaluated since the early age, it helps them to rectify their shortfalls and to learn and compete gradually.
For instance
, a child learns time management, decision making and situation analysis skills which help him throughout his life, especially, once he takes his professional and practical move. On
other hand
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the other hand
, it causes some drawbacks, the only age bracket when one can enjoy as a free soul get ruined, a child loses his carefree
atitude
a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways
attitude
attitudes
 in order to get grades and be in the competition. Unfortunately, he is forced to be
judgemental
depending on judgment
judgmental
 and result
oriented which
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oriented, which
 ultimately snatches his childhood.
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