One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend's offer. In you letter give your opinion of your friend's business idea tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer and explain your reasons for this decision
Dear Amrit,
How are you? I hope you've been well. I received your letter in which you mentioned about starting a small
business
in Brantford. I really liked your idea of running a food truck in Downtown. Moreover
, it would be great to start something new as Brantford doesn't have any good Indian restaurant
.
You will be glad to know that I am interested in becoming a partner in Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
this
brilliant business
. As you know, I am working full time; so I can't assist you during morning
but I am happy to help in the evening and on weekends. Even, I think you should Add an article
the morning
also
continue your job,
so that we can save some extra money to finance our Remove the comma
apply
business
.
I took this
decision after consulting my friend who is currently running a restaurant in India; he said food trucks have been in trend recently and are making good money. Furthermore
, he is delighted to share some of his recipes with us which we can surely put in our menu. One thing more, I would like to talk about investment and our share in business
, so if possible can we meet at my place this
coming Saturday.
I can't wait to see you!
Your friend,
ArjunSubmitted by bhullarsimran2121 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph revolves around a single central idea for maximum clarity and cohesion.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a logical flow in your ideas and provide clear progression from one paragraph to another for a cohesive structure.
task achievement
Include specific details in your response to directly address all parts of the task and show a complete understanding of the requirements.
task achievement
Use a tone that is appropriate for the context, which in this case would be semi-formal or informal since you are writing to a friend; maintaining that tone consistently is crucial.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,