Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. Do you agree or disagree?
I disagree with the statement that
people
do not entertain themselves as much as they used to because of modern Use synonyms
technology
. I believe that modern Use synonyms
technology
has not made Use synonyms
people
less creative. In Use synonyms
fact
it has changed the definition of Add a comma
fact,
leisure
and the lifestyle of Use synonyms
people
. Modern Use synonyms
technology
has changed our definition of Use synonyms
leisure
. Earlier, Use synonyms
leisure
meant going out and meeting Use synonyms
people
, playing outdoor games, going to Use synonyms
cinema
to watch movies and so on. Add an article
the cinema
However
, today, Linking Words
leisure
time is full of choices. We have so many things to do within the four walls of our house. We can watch countless programs on national and international channels; we can play online games; we can chat with friends and relatives in any corner of the world; we can do Use synonyms
arm-chair
tourism by which we can visit any historical place or museum sitting in our Correct your spelling
armchair
arm-chair
. Correct your spelling
armchair
That is
why perhaps it looks as if we Linking Words
people
do not entertain ourselves as much as we used to in yesteryears. Another reason why Use synonyms
people
don’t entertain as much as before is Use synonyms
also
not because of Linking Words
technology
. Use synonyms
Technology
has, in fact, given us more time to enjoy but we can’t strike a balance between work and play. We have become workaholics. Life in the past was simpler. Use synonyms
People
worked for basic needs. Now work is not just a way of life. It is for personalUse synonyms
fulfillment
. We set goals for ourselves Change the spelling
fulfilment
such
as a house or a car. We choose Linking Words
this
way of life. Now we have improved Linking Words
standard
of living but Correct pronoun usage
our standard
this
has come at a very high cost. Linking Words
Finally
, I would like to state that the given statement is flawed because nowadays Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
specially
take Rephrase
especially
out
time to entertain themselves. Change preposition
apply
This
can be evident from the mushroom growth of Linking Words
leisure
centres Use synonyms
such
as hotels, restaurants, fun parks and spas. Tourist places are full of Linking Words
people
and train and air reservations have to be done well in advance. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, Use synonyms
technology
has not made us less creative. We entertain ourselves more than Use synonyms
earlier
times but the ways of entertainment are different and Change preposition
in earlier
technology
has given us more choices than before.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite