Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city center

Owing to the growing number of
vehicular
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vehicle
movement
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movements
in the big cities
,
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,
these
increase
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increases
has caused
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have caused
several difficulties that
has raised
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have raised
a proposal by some state to ban private cars from the central cities. In my opinion, the banning of private cars should be implemented as there have been
increase
of human fatigue caused by everyday traffic congestion we encounter on the
city
road
.
Firstly
, in the
city
we have almost all the major businesses running
day
to
day
activities that has caused
congestion making
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congestion, making
it difficult for everyone to access
,
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,
as a result
of these, other
road
users often encounter traffic caused majorly by private car users
hence
fatigue has been their significant complaint. These
has caused
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have caused
decrease in human output in their Jobs or various businesses.
For instance
,
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,
companies these days have gotten negative reviews due to their sluggish customer representatives which is totally not their
fault but
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fault, but
due to the long time spent on the
road
before getting to work.
On the other hand
, banning private cars will help
increase
usage of other means of
transportation
that will generate more revenue for the state and encourage the state to create more means of
transportation
in the global cities. These will be highly recommended for the growth and orderliness of the
city
.
For example
, the Metro Station has been left redundant for a long time because of the
increase
usage of private vehicles
,
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,
making the train means of
transportation
go unnoticed as one of the fastest means of getting to the cities which can
also
significantly help in reducing the number of private cars we have on the
road
. In conclusion
,
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,
the banning of private cars in global cities will help
increase
human output in their various
place
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places
of work and decreasing the number of negative reviews many companies have gotten as well as
increase
the growth of using other means of
transportation
that will help the efficiency of
day
to
day
activities in the
city
.
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