Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, other people think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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The zoo

is the popular place for people to visit for entertainment and to learn about wild animals.

Although

some people think it is inhuman and should be closed while

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

argues they are helpful in saving endangered species. So, it should be kept open.

This

is an issue which is greatly debated and controversial. In

this

essay, I will discuss both the viewpoints in the upcoming paragraph with relevant examples. To commence with, animals in

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zoos

the zoo

are devoid of their natural habitat and lifestyle.

For instance

, in most of the zoos,

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the area

is very limited. Being caged in a

zoo they

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zoo, they

have to live a life of misery where they cannot enjoy a liberal life.

Thus they

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Thus, they

lose their

independence which

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independence, which

they were previously enjoying while living in a jungle or forest. It is

quiet

to a degree (not used with a negative)

quite

cruel for animals.

However

, it is necessary to keep some animals in the

zoo

since living in the wild does not suit them.

For example

, pandas were facing serious issues

such

as deforestation, poaching and lack of food and have been endangered species for many years. But they are well fed and well cared in the national

zoo

and have been protected.

On the other hand

, a

zoo

has numerous benefits for our society.

First

and foremost,

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the zoo

provides

people especially

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people, especially

children, an opportunity to learn about animals and nature. To exemplify, children who visit a

zoo

get the chance to know about different animals and can broaden their perspective.

Thus

zoos are educational for

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the young ones

and adults as well.

Secondly

,

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the zoo

can be

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a source

of funds for the research on protecting rare animals. In the nutshell, I would like to pen down by saying that zoos have great advantages for both, the endangered species as well as

society but

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society, but

the animal’s dignity should be maintained and they should not be exploited.