Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

So popular are social networking sites

such

as Facebook or Twitter, that almost every single individual in today's

society

are utilizing

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is utilizing

them on

daily basis

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a daily basis

via computers or smart phones.

However

, despite the potential risks they pose, they do expert

more benefit

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more beneficial

effects on individuals and

society

as a whole Social networking sites seem to take heavy to toll on the health of people and on

well-being

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the well-being

of

society

.

For instance

, many minors and celebrities

in particular

, are easily bullied or harassed by

threaatening

threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments

threatening

messages or photos spreading on these social media sites. One becoming a target of

cyberbullying

, not only are those victims more likely to suffer

axiety

(psychiatry) a relatively permanent state of worry and nervousness occurring in a variety of mental disorders, usually accompanied by compulsive behavior or attacks of panic

anxiety

, depression and even suicide, but

this

also

futher

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

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does harm to their life

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and

work.

More over

in addition

Moreover

, in can make us misconceive between meaningful relationships fostered and various relationships established through virtual world. So an undesirable consequence that

further

detrimentally affects ways more people as well as communities and

thus

significantly reduce social cohesion The exposure to these social media sites

on the other hand

is

facilator

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facilitated

facilitator

in extending opportunities of learning

form

a giver or sender

from

various people regardless of geographical locations and cultural. Compared with traditional education that learners have to be confined to a classroom, learning through social networking sites empowers them to interact with each other on a large-scale, sharing information about their culture and work

colaboratively

accomplished by collaboration

collaboratively

.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

, SNS is

also

a useful, indispensable tool for

work place

a place where work is done

workplace

learning thanks to its regular accessibility through which employees can improve their expertise in

flexible way

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a flexible way

flexible ways

. For government or international organizations take advantage of its fast-spreading nature to share public information, new rules or regulation

and prom

ote civic engagement

such

as public health and polictical activities In conclusion, detrimental as social networking sites appear to be, they do benefit the general public and the whole

society

educationally and civically