In many countries, more and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays there is an increasing number of people are fond of buying household electrical appliances,

such

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as television, microwave oven and rice cooker.

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this

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This

phenomenon both have advantages and disadvantages, and I think it

have

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has

had

more positive effects than negative effects. There is no denying that too many electrical devices would waste a lot of electric power, especially for those appliances which need

power supply

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a power supply

continuously,

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as air conditions and refrigerators.

these

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These

wastes is approximately

occurred

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occurring

in every family.

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, people really like to buy kinds of appliances, especially when new patterns come out, residents would like to replace the old ones as new ones.

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that

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That

is not only led to waste money but

also

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generate new rubbish, which is not friendly to the environment.

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, the positive development of buying household cannot be ignored.

buying

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Buying

households

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with

people may represent citizens are

more care

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more careful

about their life quality than before, in old days many people are worrying about survival so they couldn't afford to other things except food.

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, appliances give a life easy way for nowadays' citizen, with supported by high technology, people's life are more convenient and comfortable.

economy

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Economy

is increased by people's consume, our society is built on economical currents, consumers' purchasing is essential part.

when

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When

people would like to afford appliances means

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country's economy is in a good condition. To sum up,

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some people are arguing that buying wide range of households may bring power waste and environmental harmful, advanced technology may resolve these problems. In my opinion, I think buying households

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are

have been

a positive development.

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