If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?

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industry has been growing rapidly lately, especially since we have entered the social media era. So many

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entrepreneurs

introduce their products and innovations by advertising through social media.

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, some people believe that

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an advertisement

is not useful if a

product

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can be sold easily. There is

also

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a notion that if

this

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case happened,

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the advertisement

will be

lost

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losing

lose

its main function and can only be seen as an entertaining source. In

this

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essay, I shall explain some functions of

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the advertisement

itself and provide some arguments why I disagree with the statement above.

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with,

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has several functions,

for instance

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introducing products to the

market

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, creating

brand

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image

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, and increasing sales. There are several products that are not

necessarily

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necessary

to be advertised because they only reach niche

market

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, namely Rolex,

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brand

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the brand

of a luxury watch.

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, in general terms, advertising a

product

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can give some beneficial impacts as mentioned before.

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, we have to be clear the

market

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segment and the

market

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size that we want to reach for a

product

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. If we only think about short-term sales and profit,

then

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the advertisement

is clearly unnecessary.

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, selling a

home-made

made or produced in the home or by yourself

homemade

cake to our classmates. It can be easily sold, but it is not scalable and sustainable.

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, if we want to sell

skin-care

care for the skin

skincare

products, we have to gain customers’ trust even just to try the

product

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samples. We have to build the

brand

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image

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that the

skin-care

care for the skin

skincare

products that we are

sold

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selling

are safe. Once we have gained

customers

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customers'

trust and successfully built the desirable

brand

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image

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, the

product

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selling will be increasing year by year, and

this

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process can be enhanced by endorsing some famous actress to use the

skin-care

care for the skin

skincare

products. To conclude, I personally disagree with the opinion that advertising is unnecessary and only a kind of entertainment. I believe there are some benefits of advertising a

product

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if we set a long-term and sustainable goal, not only the

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simplest

simple

sale the

product

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, but

also

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build a

brand

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image

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

333 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

inform
educate
brand awareness
capture attention
competitive market
influence consumer behavior
purchasing decisions
positive association
enhance appeal
product differentiation
innovation
customers' awareness

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