Weddings are more expensive in many countries present and past. What is the reason behind this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Weddings are one of the auspicious occasions in anyone’s life.
However
, it has been observed that today’s generation is spending
insane amount
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insane amounts
an insane amount
of money on their marriages
in contrast
to earlier times. People usually celebrate different ceremonies to make
this
day memorable. In the upcoming paragraphs, the reasons for
this
trend will be
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
and why it can be seen as harmful to the society. There are myriad of reasons,
First
and foremost, people often consider expensive marriages as a status symbol and spend huge amount of money by inviting unnecessary guests along with buying costly clothes and
jewelry
an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)
jewellery
.
For instance
, those who want to show their community that they are very well connected socially, would consider
this
an opportunity and would invite as many as political figures as they can.
Second
, development of media influences people’s perception of how a wedding should be conducted. Idea of fairytale style marriages
heighten
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heightens
our sensation and lust for
mind blowing nuptials
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the mind blowing nuptials
. Though,
this
growing trend has huge negative implication
on
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of
our society.
Firstly
the middle class which constitute 80 percentage of
total population
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the total population
is the prey of
this
craze due to demonstration effect.
For example
, in a bank
survey it
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survey, it
was found that loan for
nuptials
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the nuptials
has triggered to 65percent from 30 percent compared to past years.
Secondly
, matrimonial ceremonies are losing their true meaning and importance which is to unite people in love.
Instead
become obsessed with the vanity of the ceremony. In the nutshell, I would like to pen down by saying that to maintain their stigma and
showoff
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show off
to their community are the prime causes for
this
big fat
weddings
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wedding
.
However
, it does not come without the price of financial worries for the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • societal expectations
  • grand weddings
  • social media platforms
  • extravagant ceremonies
  • benchmark
  • commercialization
  • wedding planners
  • destination weddings
  • designer dresses
  • professional photographers
  • videographers
  • inflation
  • cost of goods and services
  • venues
  • catering
  • décor
  • personalization
  • customization
  • unique venues
  • intricate themes
  • specialized entertainment
  • guest lists
  • familial pressures
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