Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating to the environment, population and education as well . What problems will your country face in the next 10 years? How can these problems be overcome

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In recent times, it has been discovered that nations around the globe would experience major issues regarding its biosphere, human resource and learning process.
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, problems to be experienced are largely peculiar to different societies.
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, I am of the view that the main difficulties that might be experienced by my
country
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are
terrorism
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and economic recession. One major challenge that my
country
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has the potentiality of encountering if appropriate actions are not taken is
terrorism
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. In fact, there has been a pocket full of acts of insurgency experienced in various states of the federation, mainly because of the drastic fall in the level of employment.
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, the rise in the rate of unemployment has caused youth unrest and has a direct impact on the rise of the act of hooliganism in the
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.
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, the Nigerian Army recently issued a press release, encouraging parents to properly monitor the activities of their children as a religious sect, Boko Haram, is out recruiting young unsuspecting youths into their sect to execute the act of
terrorism
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. Another possible
issue the
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issue in the country
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might experience is
economic downturn
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an economic downturn
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is because of the fall in the exchange rate of the
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's currency. Indeed, the fall in the value of
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Naira
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would weaken its purchasing power and as
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would make basic items costly, if not beyond the purchasing capability of ordinary citizens, thereby, plunging them into extreme poverty.
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, I believe that if my
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's administration creates
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jobs
through the public service, it would reduce the level of employment.
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, relevant authorities should encourage out of job Individuals to embrace self employment by going into private business.
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, the government should be ready to sponsor, give tax incentives and provide adequate loan facilities at a zero interest rate for interested individuals.
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, in the area of
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, financial reward should be given to individuals who can furnish the appropriate authority with useful information on the activities of any extremely groups.
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, different public fora that would aid adequate enlightenment of the citizens on the ills of
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should be sponsored by government bodies and Non- Governmental Organisations. To conclude, while there is the possibility of social and economic ills in the
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In the
next
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decade, taking the right steps,
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as, job creation, proper education of members of the public on the consequences of
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, availability of tax reliefs, loan facilities and funding programs, would mitigate these impending dangers.
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