You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. Include •Why you are writing •Your suitability for the role •How you would approach the position
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter in response to the advertisement which appeared in the local newspapers last
week for a property manager of an apartment building.
I am extremely interested in this
position as I have been spending a significant number of years being employed in the real estate industry. These years of work experience enriched me with a huge amount of knowledge of working practice.
I believe I have enough qualifications and experience needed to make this
position successful. First of all, I graduated from a local university with a Master of Real Estate Management degree, which provided me with basic information and strategies about property management. Added to that, I have a high level of enthusiasm and outstanding social skills, which teach me how to interact with landlords and tenants with different cultures and financial backgrounds.
Furthermore
, I have had some ideas about how to carry out this
position. Apart from learning the policy and regulations of our company, after being employed, I will go through the building to be familiar with this
construction.
If you would like to discuss my application further
, I would be highly delighted to come to your office when you are available.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Bella LiuSubmitted by strawberry.guan on
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Task Achievement
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Coherence and Cohesion
Your clear structure and logical flow, with each paragraph dedicated to a specific point, showcase your ability to organize thoughts effectively.
Task Achievement
Your letter effectively addresses all parts of the task, demonstrating a strong understanding of the requirements. Your introduction states the purpose, the body elaborates on your suitability and approach, and your conclusion invites further discussion, showing a complete response.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.