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Some people say success in a person’s life as an adult is the result of the way he was brought up by his parents. Do you agree or disagree?

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There seems to be a common belief among people that anyone's achievement in adulthood is due to their upbringing and parents' influence. Even though I have to agree to some extent, at the same time, it is
also
 undeniable that every individual paves their own path and deserves to be merited according to their efforts. On the one hand, children spend the majority of their childhood in the company of their parents and,
thus
, the imprint they leave is of extreme importance.
In other words
, parents educate and discipline their children from the very beginning of their lives, and if they implement proper motivational techniques and develop their imagination through various methods,
this
 would surely develop commendable qualities in every young individual. A case in point is all political dynasties,
such
 as the Kennedy's and Clintons, where children's enthusiasm for politics was boosted from birth, contributing to their future success as adults.
This
 is why it would be unreasonable to undermine the influence parents can have on their offsprings' positive career outcomes.
Nonetheless
, having been properly raised and given the necessary foundation can only be some of the factors for
individuals
Suggestion
individual
 triumph as adults.
This
 is because, as children grow up, their uniqueness
grows
Suggestion
grow
 with them, and over time, they develop a set of skills based solely on their individual abilities. It is
then
 when their parent's imprints start to fade, and they go on their separate path, based on their merits. An excellent example of
this
 is Marc Zuckerberg, the founder of Facebook, whose parents tried to involve him in their family's dental practice ever since he was a child, but never succeed because the IT sector was what he was truly good at, and where he thrived.
Therefore
, parents impact cannot be regarded as the key factor for
individuals
Suggestion
individual
 professional triumph. In conclusion,
although
 it is acceptable to believe that one's success is deeply affected by a parent's way of upbringing, an individual's inner abilities cannot be disregarded as unimportant.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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