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Young people in modern in modern world seem to have more power and influence that any previous young generation. why is this case? What impact does this have on the relationship of old and young people

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comparatively
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Comparatively
 address, today's youth seem to
causes
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cause
 more power and influence because of
development
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the development
 of technology, science and globalisation for so it
also impact
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also impacts
has also impacted
is also impacting
 on
relationship
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relationships
the relationship
.
this
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This
 essay
shed
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sheds
 light on factors and its impact on bonds among
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
 people.
To begin
 with, another for
such
 power and successor can be considered the improvement of
educational system
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the educational system
educational systems
.
today
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Today
 in many countries government wide on sensory facilities,
for
example financial
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example, financial
 resources to support the students who want to study abroad coma studying abroad not only helps to improve their
educational
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education
 but improve throw Outlook as base in different cultures in the world.
apart
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Apart
 from
this
, do not have
such
such
 a
chance and
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chance, and
this
difficulties
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difficulty
 lead to be less informed and educated current current
generation
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generated
generative
generational
generating
furthermore it
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Furthermore, it
Furthermore it
 can be
also
 noted that great difference between young and old people cause some problems
such
 as not understanding
this
 each other
for instance
 coma some older people do not want to accept that you can get distance study or work and do shopping on the internet is
also
 wasting your time.
similarly
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Similarly
 the young all the
generation
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generations
 in in a not understanding the new technology. In conclusion, The main solution for
this
 problem can be afford to understand each other, because it will not be the right choice to make teenager avoid following the technology in the modern world.
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