It is common aspiration among many young peopleto run their own business, rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?

Earlier people used to prefer to work for an organization throughout their lives and retired from there after a lifetime service. But
thesedays
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these days
,
trend
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the trend
has changed,. Usually, young people aim to start their own set up no
metter
a vaguely specified concern
matter
small or big. So that, to avoid being on someone lurch. I agree with
this
point of view, in
this
way, they take several bold steps and bear both pros and cons. In
this
essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss the merits and demerits to start a
business
. Mainly, there are several benefits to run a
business
from an early age
becuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
as a fresh one has less social responsibilities, health issues as well as fear of failure.
For instance
, a young entrepreneur is far more
energatic
possessing or exerting or displaying energy
energetic
and enthusiastic while
innitiating
bring into being
initiating
a
business
. In order to make it a success he uses up to date and advance techniques and market strategies.
Moreover
, to be your own boss gives a sense of freedom, a power to take
decision
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a decision
the decision
decisions
and a chance to invest your ideas in something that you own. One of the benefits is, one doesn't need to take dictation from line manager to make a project successful and follow his instructions when he knows his ideas are more practical and approachable.
On the other hand
, working for some others is never as beneficial as owning your
business
. If you serve to others, you will always remain an employee and you can be kicked out anytime if your manager is not happy with you or find you as a competition.
Thus
, it is more risky to work and invest your brain for others.
Furthermore
, to serve for
someonr
a human being
someone
else institution can never bring a remarkable change in your
profite
the excess of revenues over outlays in a given period of time (including depreciation and other non-cash expenses)
profit
profile
profits
and status. Lets take an example of all successful young people who trusted themselves and
today ruling
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today, ruling
over the world, including
;
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;
Bill Gates, Steve Jobs, TATA group and so many others. They were no where until they started
business
. To conclude, I believe our youth is
verstile
having great diversity or variety
versatile
and have tremendous sparkling ideas
to begin
with and to prosper.
Although
, there are some cons and risk to initiate while
inexperienced but
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inexperienced, but
its
it is
it's
worth taking at
this
age.
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