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Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There has been a growing argument for school to teach students
money
management
 skills, which are rarely found in today’s curricula. Generally speaking, I agree with
this
 premise,
however
, I
also
 believe that awareness of
this
 issue should be nurtured as early as possible by
parents
Suggestion
the parents
. One of the most eminent problems that recently-0graduated young adults experience is financial problems. Most of them have just been apart from their parents, who used to cater to each and every need of theirs, and
therefore
 jumping to the real life with little or no clue in
money
management
. With
this
 in thought, it may be inferred that parents are to blame with some calamities in their children’s lives.
However
,
majority
Suggestion
the majority
a majority
 of parents
also
 do not know the
first
 thing about good fund
management
, as accentuated by the discrepancies in their
socio-economic
involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
 conditions. It is
therefore
 imperative for schools as formal education institutions to give a standardised guide for coping up with
money
Suggestion
monetary
 crisis.
Nevertheless
, people should not completely wash their
hand
Suggestion
hands
 and just hope schools to take the wheel. Despite
however
 catastrophic a household’s financial situation might be, there is no doubt that the family members know the fundamental rule of
money
 saving and self-control; after all, major crisis mainly happens not because of lack of those skills. These two basic skills are unquestionably essential for child development, as well as cementing foundation for their ominous quarter-life crises. To conclude, there is no doubt that the integration of financial
management
 into scholar activities will enhance the quality of their
student’s
Suggestion
students’
 lives. That being said, it does not mean that parents do not have anything to do with their children’s impending problems.
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