In some countries, younger people are neglecting their rights to vote. WHAT problems does this cause and what are some possible solutions?

In many nations, youngsters are ignoring to cast a
vote
during the polls. The main problem
this
causes is less number of votes to a potential candidate and the most viable solution is to educate their young people about
this
issue. The principal problem associated with ignoring to
vote
is
indicates an affirmative response
yes
, a significant candidate may lose to the opposition because of poor results in the election.
That is
to say, many younger individuals are busy with studies and engaging in social activities neglecting the primary responsibility of voting.
As a result
, a bad person can emerge as a leader by winning in the elections leading to national issues.
For example
, in 2010, Mr Clint who has got wide recognition among
people
Suggestion
the people
for his hospitality lost in the UK elections to a lesser known person due to fewer people participating in
polling
Suggestion
the polling
. A long term solution to
this
predicament is to educate young people about the dangers of not voting. Children in schools could be taught about how to participate in the ballot and learn the importance of it to a country so that the
next
generation will act more responsibly. They are
also
likely to teach their parents about the things learned at school and adults will
also
be influenced by
this
initiative.
For instance
, school children in Germany were taught about the consequences of not registering a
vote
and now they have better results in the public elections. In conclusion, the young generation is ignoring to
vote
because of syllabus at school and busy with social parties resulting in losing a prominent leader and teaching the children about the election system is the only answer.
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