Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching television is bad for children. Use specific details and examples to support your answer

Today
,
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,
everyone in
modern era
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the modern era
has
television
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a television
in their
homes
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home
. Some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that watching
television
is bad for their
kidshealth
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kids' health
kids health
. So, they restrict their adolescence from watching
tv
. But others disagree with it. According to my view,
television
play pivotal role in
infants
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infant
infant's
infants'
development. In
this
essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss both
side
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sides
of the arguments and represent my opinion.
First
of all,
television
helps a
child
to
extent
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extend
his or her range of interests. Children can find out many new things and make many
exiting
creating or arousing excitement
exciting
discoveries for themselves.
In addition
to these practical benefits
television
improves children's vocabulary, their memory and gives them the opportunity to gain more knowledge. I think it is very essential for a
child
. Of
cause
education imparted in a series of lessons or meetings
course
, someone can say that there are plenty of different recourses of information
such
as books and teachers. But, I think, in our modern world children must learn faster and use all contemporary technology in order to succeed.
Second
of all, watching cognitive programs helps children to learn more about
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
, our environment and about the importance of preserving our
forest
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forests
and wild animals that live there. Scientists say that a
child
should not watch
TV
more
then
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than
40 minutes successively.
For example
, my mother always made us have a break after watching
TV
more
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
half an hour and let our eyes rest for several minutes before turning on the
TV
again. I think it is the best solution. To sum up, I believe that
television
gives children and all people the opportunity to learn what
can not
can not
cannot
be
learn
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learned
from books.
Television
and movies
in particular
allow people to feel the reality and see what they will most likely not be able to see in their lives. Personally, when I was a
child I
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child, I
liked to watch cognitive programs about wild animals. Unfortunately, my family had only one
TV
, but these programs were the only ones we all wanted to watch. So, we gathered in our living room and watched them in complete silence and I always remember those moments with a smile on my face.
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