In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays, the present youth plays an important role in

developement

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

. Number of viewer's, for the media, are reducing, day by day especially because of them. We will discuss the problem's and solution for the same, in the below. Coming to the problem, As mentioned, follower's of the newspapers, has been decreased a lot, that too by young people. There are many reason's for the cause and important of them are the busy schedule's and advance technology. Lets discuss in detail each.

Firstly

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, fast life,

everone

all people

everyone

hardly fine time for reading

paper

Suggestion

the paper

papers

. So they

relay

have confidence or faith in

rely

internet

Suggestion

the internet

to gather the information.

For example

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, they can get the information

what ever

one or some or every or all without specification

whatever

they required using it, even before the newspaper got published.

This

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made the drastic reduction of news readers.

This

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can be solved by making the Paper

digitalize

a powerful cardiac stimulant obtained from foxglove

digitalis

digitalise

Secondly

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Techincal

of or relating to technique or proficiency in a practical skill

technical

advance, Using smart phone and

availabilty

the quality of being at hand when needed

availability

of online website's, everyone

tend

Suggestion

tends

to get required knowledge from them instantly,

instead

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of waiting for TV

bulliten

a brief report (especially an official statement issued for immediate publication or broadcast)

bulletin

time.

Moreover

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, they are free and reliable. But, watching the news with family is more beneficial than alone.

Suggestion

get to know the opinion of our family member's required the topic. In conclusion, Everyone should read

newspaper

Suggestion

the newspaper

a newspaper

newspapers

and watch

small screen

Suggestion

the small screen

atleast

Suggestion

at least

for some time, which improves reading capabilities and enhance our general awareness.

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0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

216 words

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Fully explain your ideas

The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important.Discuss both views and giv your opinion.

Do you agree or disagree with the idea that high schools should prohibit students from using their sell phones at school?

sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. what do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships?what can be done to help couples feel closer?

You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Say what experience you have Ask what the work involves Enquire about conditions