In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, the present youth plays an important role in
developement
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
. Number of viewer's, for the media, are reducing, day by day especially because of them. We will discuss the problem's and solution for the same, in the below. Coming to the problem, As mentioned, follower's of the newspapers, has been decreased a lot, that too by young people. There are many reason's for the cause and important of them are the busy schedule's and advance technology. Lets discuss in detail each.
Firstly
, fast life,
everone
all people
everyone
hardly fine time for reading
paper
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the paper
papers
. So they
relay
have confidence or faith in
rely
on
internet
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the internet
to gather the information.
For example
, they can get the information
what ever
one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
they required using it, even before the newspaper got published.
This
made the drastic reduction of news readers.
This
can be solved by making the Paper
digitalize
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digitalis
digitalise
.
Secondly
,
Techincal
of or relating to technique or proficiency in a practical skill
technical
advance, Using smart phone and
availabilty
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
of online website's, everyone
tend
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tends
to get required knowledge from them instantly,
instead
of waiting for TV
bulliten
a brief report (especially an official statement issued for immediate publication or broadcast)
bulletin
time.
Moreover
, they are free and reliable. But, watching the news with family is more beneficial than alone.
we
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We
get to know the opinion of our family member's required the topic. In conclusion, Everyone should read
newspaper
Suggestion
the newspaper
a newspaper
newspapers
and watch
small screen
Suggestion
the small screen
atleast
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at least
for some time, which improves reading capabilities and enhance our general awareness.
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