At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Different countries have different ratios between the younger and older people. In some nations, the ratio between the young adults and elderly is quite large, and
this
situation
has its unique advantages and disadvantages. In this
essay, the pros and cons and weather the pros outweigh the cons or not will be discussed.
There are two primary advantages of the situation
. Firstly
, the overall productivity of the nation
would be high. This
would be owing to the fact that, younger folks would prefer to work and become financially independent, whereas the older ones would likely retire and be taken care of. Secondly
, the burden on the young adults to take of
the elderly would be low, and Suggestion
on
hence
might work even more effeciently
. with efficiency; in an efficient manner
efficiently
In addition
, the taxes to be paid would also
be almost non-existent, as the government does not have to spend much in the facet of providing affordable health care to the elderly.
However
, the given situation
obviously has its downsides too. First
of all, if the population of a nation
largely consists of young adults, then
it would lead to problems in the future; either the population of the nation
would almost get doubled and increase at an alarming rate or the population might be in control, but rather, the ratio of elderly to younger people would steeply increase. Secondly
, if there is not a considerable number of elderly, then
the younger ones might not be able to recieve
proper advice and crucial guidance on how to deal with problems which has to be faced in life, and get something; come into possession of
receive
therefore
leads to them having to figure how to deal with those issues on their own. Hence
, there are cons to this
situation
, especially for the future generations.
In conclusion, the pros to having a large percentage of young adults include the high
productivity levels of the Suggestion
higher
nation
, and them not having to worry about taxes; the cons would be that those nations might have to face problems in the future and also
the lack of proper guidance to the youger
ones. In my opinion, on the overall, though there are advantages to used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
this
situation
, the disadvantages definitely outweighs them.Submitted by rameshbabu on
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