Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The

society

is changing every day.

Traditional way

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A traditional way

Traditional ways

of spending our free time has changed drastically in recent years. Shopping takes the priority of young

adult's

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adults'

leisure bucket list. Some folks insist that,

this

affects the

society

in

positive way

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a positive way

positive ways

while others insist that it has a negative

impact

. In

this

article I am going to discuss

this

in

further

, before

come

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coming

to a conclusion.

Firstly

, some people say that, shopping has a positive

impact

to the

society

. The lives of people have greatly affected and changed after

invention

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the invention

of social media platforms and the internet. Because people see what others do and what are the latest trends through those

medias

a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

mediums

.

For

example

, people are lined up near the Apple mobile stores whenever a new flagship arrived to the market. Because people are very keen to update their tech devices. Another

example

is that, after a famous movie is released, people try to imitate those actors by wearing those costumes. Due these reasons, shopping has become the number one leisure activity among young adults.

On the other hand

, some folks elaborate that

this

is a negative trend. Because these people insist that the energy of these young adults are wasting for nothing. They hold the notion that the energy should spend toward the positive outcome of the

society

.

For

example

, organize a protest for environmental

impact

by the factories.

Also

, the young adults are spending their hard-earned money for these tech gadgets and cloths which is a waste of money. Because whenever a new set of gadgets are found they are going to dump the previously owned

gadeget

a device or control that is very useful for a particular job

gadgets

which to the same job and buy a new one. Because of all these reasons, some people say shopping is a negative development. In my opinion, It is good to update about the latest trends.

For

example

, by shopping if you can find something good that makes your life easier and simpler,

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

you should buy that

products

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product

.

Also I

Accept comma addition

Also, I

believe that as long as if you are a self disciplined person,

this

development does not

impact

you in

bad manner

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a bad manner

the bad manner

. In conclusion, every development has both negative and positive

impact

to our lives and to the

society

. It is our duty to apply these changes to our lives in a positive way.