Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The lesson learnt from the past does not have no more advantages for people living in the present. In my experience, it is not true at all and the lesson from the past can give us a chance not to happen a serious
mistakes
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mistake
in the present.
First
of all, the present issues that we face today are
result
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the result
a result
from
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of
the past. It is impossible to neglect all the bad lessons that happened in the past. By doing that can affect our
society
seriously if we ignore the practice from the past. Take an example, there was a surge cyclone hit in
delta region
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the delta region
of our country the
last
five years ago and over 100000 people were killed by
this
giant storm because of a wrong information announced by the authorities. Apart from that, people
also
did not take serious action about that tropical storm as they thought
that is
just
ordinary storm
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an ordinary storm
because they always used to face storms annually. As a consequence, there were a massive of death and a huge damage on infrastructures and
economy
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the economy
of our country. After that, the government always aware to release the exact information concerned with
such
a kind of disaster to public. The community
also always follow
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also always follows
has also always followed
the
metrological
of or pertaining to atmospheric phenomena, especially weather and weather conditions
meteorological
information released through radio, newspaper and the broadcasting strictly.
Secondly
, learning about the past brings many benefits to our
society
by not
doing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
serious mistakes in the present. Our
world
came across with the
First
and
Second
World
War and the countless people were killed and injured during the
world
.
Furthermore
, several things,
for example
, heritage and historic places and the ancient cities,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
were destroyed during the war.
Then
, the
world
leaders and people learnt the effects of war and they wanted the peaceful
society
.
As a result
, the biggest organization in the
world
, the United Nations was established in order to maintain the peaceful
world
without no more
world
wars. In conclusion, learning the past is very important for our
society
because the serious faults were
happened
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happening
by human being. The learning lesson from the past can create not to happen the unpleasant events
for
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of
our future generation.
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