Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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Learning is not only an

integeral

existing as an essential constituent or characteristic

integral

part of our day to day activity, but

also

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very important for the students who are the future of tomorrow. Some say that the money spent on the education of children does provide them with

facts but

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facts, but

not with any practical

skillset

Suggestion

skill set

, to which I definitely agree. It's like a race and each individual is trying to be

first

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moreover they

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moreover, they

are like people with no desire to learn something out of the box or practical.

Instead

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of going out

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the ground and getting their hands dirty, the pupils think their hard work is well deserved staring at the books. The universities charge extra money and

than

subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)

then

provide facts which are printed in a decade old book, which the kids can

also

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google and can get better answers.

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, a study found that 40% of the schools in the UK have students, who are introverts as are not exposed to the broader aspect of study.

Initially

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the schools and universities were made so that the youngsters can gain vast knowledge,

however

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now they have become just a profit making business. The students are nobody's concern, till everybody is getting paid

with

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the same old book why to do something different. The Kids who are smart understand and opt for better places and grow as an individual, while the other stay in

same situation

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the same situation

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, a study in India stated that only 10% of the students

acheive

to gain with effort

achieve

practical knowledge before their

first

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job, which is generally around 22 years. In conclusion, the

education

Suggestion

educational

bodies are not changing anytime soon, the parents and their offsprings have to do a proper

reasearch

systematic investigation to establish facts

research

before thinking of some real education.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

284 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

practical skills
theoretical knowledge
balanced approach
rote learning
critical thinking
problem-solving skills
student satisfaction
educational outcomes
employer expectations
lifelong learning
adaptability
competitive edge
job-ready

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks, and motorcycles are banned from the city center. Public transportation like buses, taxis, and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social prblems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why this is the case? What can be done about this problem?

These days, it is becoming increasingly popular for people to live in another country for either work or their studies. While many people can find greater opportunities abroad, others may struggle to adapt. What are the advantages of living in a foreign country and what are the disadvantages?

A lot of people find it difficult to write letters and often avoid doing so altogether. Letter writing is a dying art. Do you agree with this statement?