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Some people believe that governments must apply high taxes to provide good public services for everyone. Give your opinion.

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Imposing taxes is how governments generate revenue they require to run the country.
Although
 the common believe is that high
tax
 rates are crucial for the betterment of public services, there are groups who would argue against
this
.
This
 essay will demonstrate why taxing at a higher
rate
 is necessary to ensure better public services for all, and to ensure proper
wealth
 distribution in the society. The economic development of a country is dependent on the development of infrastructure
such
 as roads, electricity, bridges etc. The government pays for these through the amount generated from taxes. By charging more taxes, authorities can ensure greater developments of public services.
This
 is evident from the developed countries where they
tax
 you more, but in return you get more in the forms of public services. While in developing countries, as you do not have to pay hefty taxes, you won’t get to enjoy better public services. High
tax
 rates,
thus
 serve to the overall development of the country. Taxes
also
 play an important role in creating a balanced society through the distribution of
wealth
. Taxes are usually not imposed at a flat
rate
 rather
on
Suggestion
at
 an increasing
rate
 as opposed to your
wealth
. That means, the wealthy people pay more
tax
 than those of less fortunate. As
tax
 is used for the betterment of all in the form of public services,
this
 creates a better distribution of
wealth
 within the society. To conclude, higher
tax
 rates are co-related to better public services.
However
, taxing at an abnormally high
rate
 may result in people losing interest in earning more,
thus
 hurting the economy. In my opinion, the government should find perfect
tax
 rates that appreciates economy, and
also
 generates enough revenue for the public services.
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