You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a english speaking friend. In your letter explain explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Amber, I hope

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letter finds you and your family all well. I’m writing to tell you that I’ve just moved to a new apartment. As you know, my old apartment needed to be renovated, but the landlord refused several times to allocate money for its renovation.

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, it becomes currently quite small for my family to live in as it has one bedroom only. At present, I have 2 children, who need 2 more bedrooms, a study

room

, and a wider area to play in. My new apartment consists of 3 bedrooms, a comfortable living

room

, and a wonderful terrace, where my children can play safely.

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a suitable study

room

, where I can work in a quiet environment. All the interior, the paint on the walls and ceramic floors are

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marvelous

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condition, so no more maintenance is needed. It’d be a great idea if you come with your family

weekend to see it. Let’s spend some exciting moments together and enjoy watching new movies in the living

room

. Think of it and let me know as soon as you can. Please pass on my best wishes to your family. All the best, Maria.

Sun Jun 23 2019

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