Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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For a celebrity, constantly followed by

paparazzies

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paparazzi

is one of the scariest thing one can imagine.

Everyday

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Every day

we open our social media and find some of the biggest stars hiding their faces while getting captured in photos or videos by random people in

street

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the street

. These paparazzi

somehow know

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somehow knows

their schedule so that they can reach at the destination before the Star

famer

a person who operates a farm

farmer

and ask for autographs or click some selfies. It takes a huge toll on a celebrities’ personal

life

. Many people have raised their voice against

this

trend, but many find it amusing as well and want to

continuedly

seemingly without interruption

continually

get

fresh feed

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a fresh feed

from

this

channel. It is said that if a person can manage his personal

life

and professional

life

separate, he or she can lead a happy

life

. Privacy is a

birth right

a right or privilege that you are entitled to at birth

birthright

for anyone and everyone. One should not feel scared to go out to get

expose

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exposed

media

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the media

. A celebrity is someone who

have worked

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has worked

very hard to attain that position in our society and now they should be able to enjoy their status. But the problem arises when after getting denied by them,

paparazzies

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paparazzi

keep

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keeps

invading their privacy without their consent. Very recently, a headline came front at the New York times showcasing a fight between Kanya west, an established musician, and a paparazzi who does not step back at Kanye’s

daughter

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daughter's

birthday.

On the other hand

, many fans do not mind their favourite celebrity getting inspected and disturbed by media

personal

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personalities

personality

. They want to know everything that happens to their ideals wither it be

from

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for

personal or professional

life

. They defend it by saying it as a mere price of being famous. In my opinion, invading anyone’s privacy without their consent is not only

wrong but

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wrong, but

it is a crime. We should consider super stars as a human

first

and should respect their private space. A paparazzi should always

first ask before

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ask first before

jumping on them with flashlights. They should follow them only in public events.

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