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Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than of other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

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Learning
literature
 will improve the knowledge of children.While some people believe that teaching their own
country
literature
 to children is more important than the other
country
. I partially agree with
this
 statement and will explain the reasons in
this
 essay.
Literature
 provides an important source of an information for understanding one' own
country
.Most of the
literature
 available today will help us to explore more about our nation. It shows the cultural heritage
,
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,
 the methodologies, customs
,
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,
socio economic
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social, economic
social economic
 structure followed by our
ancenstors
someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)
ancestors
.
Moreover
,
literature
 about our own
country
 will be available in
out
of or belonging to us
our
 own native language which helps in effective teaching of our
literature
.
However
,
On the other hand
, teaching other
country
's
literature
 will
also
 help in
undertanding
the cognitive condition of someone who understands
understanding
 the variety of
culture
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cultures
. It will provide an
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
 to learn other languages, if the
literature
 is available only in
particu;ar
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
country
's language.Learning other
country
's
literature
 may influence one person and there is a
possiblity
a future prospect or potential
possibility
 that it may cause a person to feel low about their own nation. In summary,
Although
 teaching other
country
's
literature
 will improve the knowledge about different countries and culture, I feel that one should understand about their own
country
 before learning other
country
's
literature
.
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