SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT IN THE MODERN WORLD IT IS VERY DIFFICULT FOR PEOPLE TO HAVE A HEALTHY LIFESTYLE. OTHERS, HOWEVER, SAY THAT IT IS EASY FOR PEOPLE TO BE HEALTHY AND FIT IF THEY WANT TO BE. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

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Some people believe that keeping a healthy way of life is not

easy especially

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easy, especially

when we live in

globalisation era

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the globalisation era

Nevertheless

, others argue that keeping healthy and maintain fit are possible if people have

awareness

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an awareness

about their bodies.

This

essay will discuss both of views. Nowadays, there are some factors which cause health problems.

Firstly

, consuming unhealthy dishes is the main problem since most of people do not have much time to cook their own food. There are so many restaurants which provide junk food and people think that it can solve their problems.

In addition

, the development of technology can bring drawback for human.

For example

, teenagers tend to stay in front of their computers playing games or keeping in touch with their friends all day. These behaviours will cause unhealthy lifestyle as they just sit in the same place and make less movement.

Moreover

, at the present time, many companies have developed new technologies to help people keeping their healthy lifestyle.

For instance

, people tend to purchase

sport

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sports

sporting

equipment in order to use it in their own home. As the result, even though they do not have much time to go to sport

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

, they still can do some exercises in their home.

Therefore

, having

healthy body

Suggestion

a healthy body

is not as difficult as we think. To conclude, it is clear that

although

some technologies alter people lives becoming healthy lives, I extremely believe that it brings more problems of unhealthy lifestyle.

However

, people's efforts are the biggest factor to gain health and fit.

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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT IN THE MODERN WORLD IT IS VERY DIFFICULT FOR PEOPLE TO HAVE A HEALTHY LIFESTYLE. OTHERS, HOWEVER, SAY THAT IT IS EASY FOR PEOPLE TO BE HEALTHY AND FIT IF THEY WANT TO BE. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

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