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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

#schools #students #study #courses #support
The question weather high school should allow students to
study
 the courses that students want to
study
 is the one
that is
 open for debate. Some people believe that scholar from high school should have the right to
study
 the courses they like.
However
, other people disagree and stand that teenagers
can not
can not
cannot
 totally be sure what they like and what they need to know at their age. In
this
 essay I will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 these points and present my view in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of people who believe that some courses must be required to
study
 by students. From the one side, having a chance to choose what one likes to
study
 can bring many benefits.
First
 of all, a student can be better prepared for the career he likes because he can spend more time studying what he is interested in.
Second
 of all, students will learn with more enthusiasm because they will learn what they like. From the other side, teenagers often can not completely understand what they want to do in the future. So, given a chance to choose, they can choose classes, which are easy to learn and do not take much time to
study
.
As a result
 of
this
 after
graduation many
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graduation, many
 students can be unprepared to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 in universities and, of cause, make careers. Personally, I think that some courses
such
 as mathematics, literature, writing English must be required for studying
by
Suggestion
with
 students.
This
 will helps them to gain more knowledge and experience, develop
ability
Suggestion
the ability
 to think logically, improve writing skills, etc. So, students will be better prepared for the real world and independence life. To sum up, I think that high school should have required courses because it is essential for a student to have a good base for the future life. Required courses as a rule are more
complicated but
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complicated, but
 they give the opportunity for students to extend their range of interests and help them to develop many important characteristics
such
 as
self-confident
Suggestion
self-confidence
,
persistent
Suggestion
persistence
, patience, etc.
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