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some people think that dangerous sports should be banned , while others think people should be free to chooes disscus both view and give your opinion

#people #sports #chooes #disscus
Nowadays, the kind of sports
are increased
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is increased
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,
 one we can find dangerous sports and safe sports
,
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,
 it is commonly believed that the dangerous
soprts
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sports
 should be
preventes
keep from happening or arising; make impossible
prevented
 from governments
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,
 whereas others believe that
this
descusion
an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic
discussion
decision
 up to people and their chooses
.
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In my opinion
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 I strongly agree with that each person is responsible for his
descusion
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
.
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.
 In
this
 essay I will
disscus
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
disclose
this
uviversial
of worldwide scope or applicability
universal
 issue
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Firstly
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 there is no doubt that sports are considered as a hope and it carries a lot of interesting moments during practise it
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 but some people thought that keeping alive is more important than having a fun
.
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Besides
 governments should prevent
this
 kind of sports
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
 can affect on our lives
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For instance
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 according to a survey in Australia
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,
most of
climbers
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the climbers
 to
Iverest
a mountain in the central Himalayas on the border of Tibet and Nepal; the highest mountain peak in the world (29,028 feet high)
Everest
 lose their
live
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lives
life
 during the climbing
.
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.
 So a
sport
 like climbing should be solely prevented
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Secondly in some
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Secondly, in some
countried
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
 it is known that when you get 18 years old you will be responsible for your
live
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life
liver
 and your
chooses even
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chooses, even
 so if it was wronger
dangers
involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm
dangerous
 because in because in
this
 period of the life people are able to realize good things for them
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Morever
in addition
Moreover
, player sports should take their own decision to choose their
sport
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For example
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,
 in The Good Doctor series
,
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,
 there was a patient who fell during her
climbing
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climb
 after her cure she wanted to climb again and again because it was part of her life
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,
 her own life
.
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 So it is unfair to let someone
does
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do
 what people or government to do
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 To conclude
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,
 in my
opinon
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
 I strongly agree with that we should give space to
sport
 players to choice
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 and I
apeal
earnest or urgent request
appeal
 governments to afford the
safty
free from danger or the risk of harm
safest
soft
 ways and
suppor
give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to
support
super
sport
 players as much as they can
.
Accept space
.
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