some people think that dangerous sports should be banned , while others think people should be free to chooes disscus both view and give your opinion

Nowadays, the kind of sports

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is increased

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one we can find dangerous sports and safe sports

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it is commonly believed that the dangerous

soprts

an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition

sports

should be

preventes

keep from happening or arising; make impossible

prevented

from governments

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whereas others believe that

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descusion

an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic

discussion

decision

up to people and their chooses

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In my opinion

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I strongly agree with that each person is responsible for his

descusion

the act of making up your mind about something

decision

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In

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essay I will

disscus

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discuss

disclose

this

uviversial

of worldwide scope or applicability

universal

issue

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Firstly

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there is no doubt that sports are considered as a hope and it carries a lot of interesting moments during practise it

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but some people thought that keeping alive is more important than having a fun

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Besides

governments should prevent

this

kind of sports

wich

interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class

which

can affect on our lives

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For instance

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according to a survey in Australia

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most of

climbers

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the climbers

to

Iverest

a mountain in the central Himalayas on the border of Tibet and Nepal; the highest mountain peak in the world (29,028 feet high)

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lose their

live

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lives

life

during the climbing

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So a

sport

like climbing should be solely prevented

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Secondly in some

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Secondly, in some

countried

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

it is known that when you get 18 years old you will be responsible for your

live

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life

liver

and your

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chooses, even

so if it was wronger

dangers

involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm

dangerous

because in because in

this

period of the life people are able to realize good things for them

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Morever

in addition

Moreover

, player sports should take their own decision to choose their

sport

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For example

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in The Good Doctor series

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there was a patient who fell during her

climbing

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climb

after her cure she wanted to climb again and again because it was part of her life

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her own life

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So it is unfair to let someone

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do

what people or government to do

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To conclude

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in my

opinon

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

I strongly agree with that we should give space to

sport

players to choice

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and I

apeal

earnest or urgent request

appeal

governments to afford the

safty

free from danger or the risk of harm

safest

soft

ways and

suppor

give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to

support

super

sport

players as much as they can

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