In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. This could be good news for individuals but it may have negative consequences for our world as a whole. What are the benefits and risks of people living to 150?
To live a longer life has been a dream for countless years. With the development of science and technology, it might be possible for people to live for
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hundred and fifty years in the near future. Use synonyms
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, in my opinion, it may not be beneficial for people to do so.
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, people could enjoy longer lives and do more of the things they want, Linking Words
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as trying different lifestyles. They could spend more time with their family and even watch their children grow to old age. Linking Words
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, people could contribute more if they lived longer lives, especially scientists and other valuable members of society. Linking Words
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, if Edison had lived longer, he might have invented more things for us or Mozart might have produced more wonderful music.
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, people might be unhealthy in their later years because their body organs are unable to deal with extreme age. Linking Words
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, more people may suffer from painful diseases Linking Words
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as arthritis. Another factor is that an increasing older population would cause many problems for society. Linking Words
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, it would place a lot of pressure on the social welfare system, a situation already developing in countries.
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hundred and fifty years far outweigh the advantages. Use synonyms
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