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‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

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There is a huge range of resources available to the modern teacher, and the right selection is crucial in delivering effective lessons. I agree that there will always be a place for
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 books in the school curriculum, despite the many benefits of the Internet.
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,
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 books (whether conventional or digital) have been developed by pedagogical experts and designed to be incorporated into a subject syllabus, leading to testing procedures
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 as formal examinations or continuous assessment.
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 means that they are proven to improve students’ academic achievement, enhancing their potential for progression to
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 or higher education.
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, the use of modern
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 books allows pupils to coordinate their studies as part of group work, hopefully making their lessons less teacher-led and more about autonomous learning.
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 in itself teaches study skills
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 as independent research and synthesising sources, rather than old-fashioned rote-learning.
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 is where the Internet, in fact, can play a useful part: to
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 and add to
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the knowledge
 which the students are assimilating via their
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 books.
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, it is the role of teachers and school management generally to ensure that use of the Internet remains a guided learning process, and not an exercise in data-gathering from Internet sources which may be unreliable or even misleading. It is true that the Internet can be invaluable for adults (
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 distance learning or self-study modules) who are able to discriminate between sources and sift information to marshal their facts.
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,
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 is a mature skill and we should not assume that school age pupils are ready to do
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. Overall, it appears that
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 books, with their quality and depth of material, are set to remain an integral part of the syllabus. The internet can be judged a useful supplement to
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, if used carefully and under supervision.
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