Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people argue that we cannot learn anything from the past

for

Suggestion

our today's

life

, whereas others

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believes

belief

that

history

is the major key to understand the

life

human being

Suggestion

a human being

. In

this

essay, I am going to discuss both of the aspects before reaching at my opinion. On the one hand, those people who

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believes

believed

that learning from previous times are not useful for these

days

Suggestion

day

lifestyle.

Firstly

, people did not have the range of facilities in past lives, which they have nowadays

such

as internet access, better transportation and so on. The result of that they could not find the valuable information about the advancements from past.

Secondly

, looking at the past

life

makes people confused.

In other words

, whenever people remind their passed

lives experiences

Suggestion

lives, experiences

life experiences

life life experiences

life's experiences

, they suddenly became concerned and loss their concentration

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their present.

On the other hand

, there is one

reasons

Suggestion

reason

why some people opine that the

history

Suggestion

essential key to know about

humans

Suggestion

human

human's

life

. Proponents of

this

point of view believe that

Accept space

whenever someone wants to understand about something

Accept space

they must be looked at the background of

particular thing

Suggestion

a particular thing

particular things

Accept space

The same case they believe

for

Suggestion

human

life

, that the background of human being reflect their

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

towards the society, what's their culture and traditions

Accept space

which helps a lot to understand human

life

For example

, if somebody wants to know about the lifestyle of

punjabi

the Indic language spoken by most people in Punjab in northwestern India

Punjabi

people. It is very useful to look at the

history

of people who lived in

punjab

a historical region on northwestern India and northern Pakistan

Punjab

from the books, which helps he/she to learn about their culture and lifestyle. In conclusion, there are some advantages of looking at

history

, but according to my opinion it is worthless. People should give preference to their today's

life

. Because today's world is very advanced as compared to

past

Suggestion

the past

Accept space

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