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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people argue that we cannot learn anything from the past
for
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in
 our today's
life
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, whereas others
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
belief
 that
history
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 is the major key to understand the
life
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 of
human being
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a human being
. In
this
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 essay, I am going to discuss both of the aspects before reaching at my opinion. On the one hand, those people who
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
 that learning from previous times are not useful for these
days
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day
 lifestyle.
Firstly
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, people did not have the range of facilities in past lives, which they have nowadays
such
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 as internet access, better transportation and so on. The result of that they could not find the valuable information about the advancements from past.
Secondly
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, looking at the past
life
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 makes people confused.
In other words
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, whenever people remind their passed
lives experiences
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lives, experiences
life experiences
life life experiences
life's experiences
, they suddenly became concerned and loss their concentration
at
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on
in
 their present.
On the other hand
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, there is one
reasons
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reason
 why some people opine that the
history
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 is
a
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an
 essential key to know about
humans
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human
human's
life
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. Proponents of
this
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 point of view believe that
,
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,
 whenever someone wants to understand about something
,
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,
 they must be looked at the background of
particular thing
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a particular thing
particular things
.
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.
 The same case they believe
for
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in
 human
life
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, that the background of human being reflect their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 towards the society, what's their culture and traditions
,
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,
which helps a lot to understand human
life
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.
For example
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, if somebody wants to know about the lifestyle of
punjabi
the Indic language spoken by most people in Punjab in northwestern India
Punjabi
 people. It is very useful to look at the
history
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 of people who lived in
punjab
a historical region on northwestern India and northern Pakistan
Punjab
 from the books, which helps he/she to learn about their culture and lifestyle. In conclusion, there are some advantages of looking at
history
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, but according to my opinion it is worthless. People should give preference to their today's
life
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. Because today's world is very advanced as compared to
past
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the past
.
Accept space
.
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