Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Hi John, How are you? Hope

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letter finds you well. I’m writing

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letter to you because I wouldn’t be able to join you in watching a film you’ve invited me for.

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is due to the reason that I’ve long

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hours in my new employment. These days I’m facing

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burden of the newly taken projects by my company. I’ve

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of one of my

friend

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by the name of David, who could possibly join your company. He lives in my

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and I know him

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the

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five years. He would be

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best choice for you. I’m suggesting David to you, as he’s

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a humorous guy like you. He’s

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a considerate person and can always be adjusted in every situation, which is the quality you are always looking

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a person. Give me a reply as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely, James

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

150 words

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