Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at schools while others think it is a waste of time. Disscuss both sides and give your opinion.
It's argued that
Art
should be mandadory
for children at educational institutes. Against required by rule
mandatory
this
ideia
, There are some who claim that it would be the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
idea
waste
of time. Suggestion
a waste
This
essays
is going to Suggestion
essay
disscuss
both to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
ideias
and choose which one is more the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
ideas
ideals
idea
resonable
.
showing reason or sound judgment
reasonable
Art
is a
Suggestion
an
extremaly
difficult field to thrive in. The job to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
oportunities
are scarce and the wages are lower. For a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
this
reason many people think that investing in art
as a suject
the subject matter of a conversation or discussion
subject
at
schools is a waste of time for children who are learning to be able to work and support themselves in the future. Suggestion
in
For instance
, a famous actress in my country said in an interview that she had to study acting without her parents knowing this
. They were against her choosing this
career because she could not make a living from it.
Children are significantly more creative than adults. Studies point that when we were born, our right brain side
, which comands
artistic and creative skills, is more developed than the left an authoritative direction or instruction to do something
commands
commends
side
. Children start to lose their creative strengths as soon as they start to learn exact subject
Suggestion
an exact subject, such
an exact subject such
such
as Mathematics and Quemistry
, which are Suggestion
Chemistry
procesed
by the left brain subjected to a special process or treatment
processed
pressed
side
. If they stop using their right brain side
at that early stage, this
can lead to a poor innovative thinking in the future. For example
, in a recent survey at Melboune
university 95% of the IT students, the capital of Victoria state and 2nd largest Australian city; a financial and commercial center
Melbourne
acostumed
to deal most of the time with numbers, declared that they are not creative at all.
Analysing both sides, it is clear that (often followed by 'to') in the habit of or adapted to
accustomed
art
is not the easiest filed to have professional success. However
, this
essay agrees with the view that children should not be deprived of learning art
at school because it would help them to keep their creative skills. Eventhough
they do not work with Suggestion
Even though
art
in the future, Creativity is an asset for thinking outside of the box and having flexiblity
to either deal with the diverse types of obstacles in their the property of being flexible; easily bent or shaped
flexibility
ellected
profession or to innovate.
chosen in preference to another
selected
elected
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