Some people think that human history has been a journey from ignorance to knowledge. Others argue that this underestimates the achievements of ancient cultures, and overvalues our achievements. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is irrefutable that the mankind has evolved over a period of time from the
perspecitves
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspectives
perspective
of not only technological but
also
social advancements and innovations.
However
, many
vateran
a serviceman who has seen considerable active service
veteran
veterans
historians and
archiologists
an anthropologist who studies prehistoric people and their culture
archaeologists
are of the view that our ancient civilizations were not far behind in terms of knowledge. If we compare the technological capabilities of
current era
Suggestion
the current era
against the previous century, there is no doubt that we are much more
sophesticated
having or appealing to those having worldly knowledge and refinement and savoir-faire
sophisticated
today. Over the
last
hundred years, we have jumped leaps and bounds when we think about the innovation in the communication and transportation technologies.
For example
; the internet, the satellite televisions and the radios would have been considered as things of fiction if someone would have talked about them two hundred years ago.
Similarly
; cars, helicopters or planes
are invented
Suggestion
were invented
just over hundred years ago. The industrial revolution and
healthcare
Suggestion
health care
innovations in the
last
two centuries have completely transformed the way we live our day to day life today.
However
, as we might not be aware about the
techlogies
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technologies
of the past, we cannot claim that they did not exist. Many
archiologists
an anthropologist who studies prehistoric people and their culture
archaeologists
ecologists
from around the world have found the hidden
evidences
Suggestion
evidence
of advancements of ancient civilizations.
For example
, during the
archiological
related to or dealing with or devoted to archaeology
archaeological
ecological
surveys in Harappa and Lothal in India, the researchers have found the evidences of well paved roads, drainage lines and active ports which might have been developed about five thousand years ago.
Additionally
, the pyramids in Egypt have proven that even before five thousand years, highly advanced civil as well as biological knowledge prevailed
on
Suggestion
in
this
planet. Preservation of pyramid's structure and the dead bodies (
also
called mummies) till date
can not
can not
cannot
be considered as a small feat by any measures! In my opinion, I somewhat agree with the view that in the
last
two centuries, the human race has seen the knowledge transformation like never before.
However
, it would be
injustice
Suggestion
an injustice
to our ancient culture if we would consider it as backward when would compare it to today's era without any concrete proofs.
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  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • progress
  • scientific advancements
  • modern science
  • Renaissance
  • human rights
  • social norms
  • ancient civilizations
  • architecture
  • philosophy
  • mathematics
  • engineering
  • political systems
  • social structures
  • environmental degradation
  • social inequality
  • indigenous cultures
  • balanced opinion
  • unique value
  • human progress
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