You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
It appears that the word college may be a proper noun in this context. Consider capitalizing the word.
The noun phrase food industry seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase Further. Consider adding a comma.
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