You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Manohar, My name is Vishal Bhat and I am from Jammu, India. I am writing

this

letter to you with reference to the advertisement about microbiology practical

course

seminar in your K. P.

college

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College

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, London. I saw

this

notice in the local newspaper

last

week. I am interested in

this

course

work as my background is Bachelor’s in microbiology and

this

course

will help to get a job in

food

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industry,

therefore

I have decided to join

this

course

to sharp my career objective. I am keen to know more details about the

course

work; I would request you to please provide the details as

such

schedule dates so that I can book my tickets as early as possible.

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I wish to know about the accommodation, whether you will be providing the residence or the learner required to book his own and

finally

the fee structure of the

course

. I hope you will understand my needs and let me know as early as possible so that I can book my tickets on early basic. Thank you in anticipation. Yours Sincerely, Vishal Bhat

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