You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear Manohar, My name is Vishal Bhat and I am from Jammu, India. I am writing
this
letter to you with reference to the advertisement about microbiology practical
course
seminar in your K. P.
college
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College

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, London. I saw
this
notice in the local newspaper
last
week. I am interested in
this
course
work as my background is Bachelor’s in microbiology and
this
course
will help to get a job in
food
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the food

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industry,
therefore
I have decided to join
this
course
to sharp my career objective. I am keen to know more details about the
course
work; I would request you to please provide the details as
such
schedule dates so that I can book my tickets as early as possible.
Further
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,Further

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I wish to know about the accommodation, whether you will be providing the residence or the learner required to book his own and
finally
the fee structure of the
course
. I hope you will understand my needs and let me know as early as possible so that I can book my tickets on early basic. Thank you in anticipation. Yours Sincerely, Vishal Bhat
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