Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweighs the disadvantages.

Some museums charge for

entrance

fee

while some do not. In my

opinion i

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opinion, I

opinion I

think the merit of charging an

entrance

fee which

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fee, which

is creation of

income

for smooth operation overshadows the drawback which is the incidence of low turnout. A major disadvantage of

this

fee

is there will be low turnout of visitors to the

museum

. Museums house antiques and artefacts for both educational purposes and

also

to enlighten the members of the public about their historical cultures. If a

fee

is attached to

such

places, people might be discouraged because on a regular basis a

museum

isnt

is not

isn't

a place people love to go for leisure. Take

for instance

when the national

museum

in Japan opened and attached an

entrance

fee there

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fee, there

was a very low turnout and the managers had to go back to the drawing board to review their terms. Despite the fact that attaching a

fee

might reduce attendance rate of visitors, an

income

is

favourabe

encouraging or approving or pleasing

favourable

favoured

for the

museum

as

this

will be used to run the operations and

also

manage the

museum

. Lots of funds go into running a

museum

before it can be done effectively. The Hongkong

museum

,

for instance

, host monthly conferences and educational shows. In order to ensure that these shows go well, experienced teachers and lecturers are hired as tour guides and they have to be paid

hence

the need for

income

cannot be over-emphasized. To conclude, while

weighhing

careful consideration

weighing

the merits and drawbacks of

entrance

fee

, the advantages still

overshadows

Suggestion

overshadow

the disadvantages as

income

is very much necessary to run a

museum

and to enable smooth operation.