Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the media
plays
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play
are playing
an important role in almost,
everycelebrity
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every celebrity
life.
Its
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It's
not only making them popular, but
also
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
way. Let's discuss the other side of the coin, as below.
Important point
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The important point
An important point
to be discussed, on the negative side, is privacy. Almost, all the popular personals, privacy was lost because of these people. In order to increase their
viewes
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
views
, they tend to make the personal life of well known public. Because of
this
situation, most of the people, lost their
space
a person's partner in marriage
spouse
and family.
For example
, if they are going to telecast, a relation of
couple
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the couple
couples
, who are friends,
then
their family may mistake as other relation, which may lead to
embrassing situation
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an embarrassing situation
embarrassing situation
for them.
Intially
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Initially
, TV channel, make the person
famous but
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famous, but
projecting their
caliber
a degree or grade of excellence or worth
calibre
, but later
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
tend
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tending
to peek in to their private matter's. So that they can increase the followers. Not only
them but
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them, but
some of us, willingly, cooperate with them in order to be a talk of
town
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the town
.
For example
, to make publicity for
an
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a
movie,
casting team
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the casting team
create
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creates
controvercy
a contentious speech act; a dispute where there is strong disagreement
controversy
controversies
on their actors.
This
is
cheap trick
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a cheap trick
, but most of the public, will get attracted to it. In conclusion, in my opinion, everyone wants and should have their personal life. Neither the media nor the other can step into it, unless
untill
up to, before the time
until
it was accepted by the owner.
Submitted by chigurupati on

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