Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this? Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?

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Nowadays

, the latest procedure that seems to be trending majorly in countries is plastic surgery. People want to look younger than their actual age.

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is predominant in the western countries and is slowly emerging in other countries as well. The very reason for

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is the influence of social media. Many celebrities follow

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practice to secure their image, which in turn is followed by youngsters or people who wish to imitate their idols.

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, a recent survey concluded that many women who got silicon breast implants experienced severe health problems until they had them removed.

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Artificial

implants of any kind inserted or injected

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into

our bodies to make us look younger or beautiful have a lot of side effects that many are not aware of

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Everyone wants to look

young

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younger

and a certain way because beauty or exterior appearance has become a major factor influencing people these days.

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causes insecurity and

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induces folks to do things to look younger due to social pressures. I personally feel

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is a really harmful practice. It portrays us in a way that we fail to recognize our

ownselves

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own selves

. Any foreign object being inserted into our body or any procedure

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said to make us look younger is just a temporary fix and is

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in fact

causing more hazards to our health than we realise.

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Therefore its

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Therefore, its

a myth that looking younger than our age is what appearance is about. Our ancestors aged gracefully and so are our parents. There is no benefit that we attain from trying to look younger. Time takes its toll on everyone and someday we would

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be in accord; be in agreement

agree

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. Accepting and loving ourselves as we are and ageing

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natural

nature

is good.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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286 words

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