Poor people and those living in the rural area find it difficult to access university education. University education should be made easy for this group of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, there is inequality in the distribution of resources.
As a result
, students that are from less developed area are faced with an uphill task of gaining
admission
into universities. It is argued by some people that the university
admission
process for
such
people should be made easier.
However
, I disagree with
this
notion as
such
a measure will reduce
standard
Suggestion
the standard
of education and it is not sustainable.
Firstly
, when
then
entry requirements of courses in the tertiary institutions are lowered for the poor and geographical disadvantaged people, the standard of education in the colleges will fall.
This
is because less qualified students may be given courses they are not qualified for.
For example
, the
north east
the compass point midway between north and east; at 45 degrees
northeast
part of Nigeria, is the poorest and most remote region, and the natives are often given incentives so as to study in the colleges. As a consequence, academic performance of students in
this
regional
universities
Suggestion
university
has been poor and many graduates from
such
institutions
can not
can not
cannot
compete with their counterparts in other parts of Nigeria.
This
would have been avoided if
this
universities
Suggestion
university
do not lower their
admission
criteria in
favor
promote over another
favour
of disadvantaged people.
Secondly
, Universities will not be sustainable if more advantages
is given
Suggestion
are given
to people that are poor and from rural
ares
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
areas
area
because colleges require huge fundings, which is mainly
derive
Suggestion
derived
from tuitions.
As a result
, the fees from other students may have to be increased, and may still be insufficient to ensure plans
such
as procurement of state-of-the-art equipments and quality research.
Therefore
, policies geared towards ensuring easier
enrollment
the act of enrolling
enrolment
of the economic and
geographically
Suggestion
geographic
geographical
disadvantaged, may result in an increase in the number of dropouts from the universities and
closure
Suggestion
the closure
of some departments. In conclusion, standards of university education may fall and they will become unsustainable if undue advantage is given during
admission
of those who are
economic
Suggestion
economically
and geographically disadvantaged. Policies geared towards ensuring equal distribution of resources in various countries will help address challenges of students that are poor and from rural areas.
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