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Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is generally accepted that the
education
 is need of
modern world
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the modern world
. Some people have the view that good
education
system
 provides
base
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a base
the base
 for the progress of a
country
 while others deny it. In my opinion
healthcare
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health care
 and natural resources
are
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are also providing
have also provided
also
 provide support to reach
required level
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the required level
a required level
 of development.
To begin
 with, science and technology is the result of
good
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a good education system
education
system
. Science means to study something deeply from different angles and to do research
.
Accept space
.
Thus
, the availability of
high standard
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the high standard
a high standard
high standards
 of universities give base to get the targeted goals in different field's of life.
Moreover
, the technological inventions give proof to all chain literacy.
For instance
, China was not a developed
country
 before two decades because
majority chunkof
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the majority chunk of
majority chunk of
a majority chunk of
 people were illiterate, after making a good
education
system
 they become a world power.
In contrast
,
health
 facilities and the use of natural resources in a proper way is more important than
good
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a good education system
education
system
 for any
country
. It is
saying
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said
 that
health
 is wealth. For good
health
 hospitals and medicines are the crucial factors.
In addition
, natural resources are precious wealth of any
country
 which are important for
independency
freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
 in different areas.
Such
 as, Arab countries do not have
good
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a good education system, but
a good education system but
education
system
 but their natural resources of oil make them different in the world and they are enjoying
development
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the development
 of their
country
.
Thus
, with the above in mind, high level of
education
system
 is important
for
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For
 the
progress but
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progress, but
health
 facilities and natural resources provide
base
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a base
the base
bases
.
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