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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The development and rapid increasing expansion in
gigantic supermarket field
Suggestion
the gigantic supermarket field
 contribute
widly
to a great degree
widely
 in the closure of local business due to
uncompete
not complete or total; not completed
incomplete
 with a giant
segmant
one of several parts or pieces that fit with others to constitute a whole object
segment
 business. In my
openion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
,
This
 expansion will not bring the death of local communities because of the
rend
Suggestion
rental
 of these gigantic supermarkets to open a small
branches
Suggestion
branch
 in the small communities and the country.
Beside
Suggestion
Besides
, These kind of supermarket ease for the people in these small communities to find a wide
rang
change or be different within limits
range
 of products
instead
 of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 to big cities to find a specific kind of product and the cheapest prices.
For instance
, Wallmart, 24/7 and many examples of big supermarkets start to
focuse
the concentration of attention or energy on something
focus
 on opening and serving many small towns, Now they
can found
Suggestion
can find
 a
spreadwide of
Suggestion
wide spread of
spread wide of
 products not just
grecories
a marketplace where groceries are sold
groceries
 under one ceiling,
such
 as
germants
an article of clothing
garments
Germans
, electronics, children toys, pharma and many.
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